Atgod88's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Frontier Psychiatrist...]

Good song, lacking animation

I tried to write this review yesterday but my power died, so lets try again.

Text is never going to match animation, you should animate some effects or even the objects that are used in the music video, the one with the huge ensemble of people. Such as when they say white as a sheet, have some ghosts or something.

If you have to use text at least make it more interesting, some ways todo this are to break up the text to individual characters and have them appear in a random sequence, breaking up the monotony.

Also try breaking the text into raw objects then animating the pieces or using some masks.

But that still cannot replace actual animated characters but it could decrease the amount of animation you have to work with by adding some text scenes to some of the harder parts to animate from the song.

I hope I helped.

[Knife Try]

Normally I hate these things being uploaded

But this one just made my smile.

Try to do something less video or add in some flash elements, flash works with video somewhat well.

Was that real or fake?

carlwalburg responds:

real

[Sometimes, y]

lol

What is that audio from?

A good short, the intros flew by a little to fast but it was still pretty good.

Good short Dim

The-Super-Flash-Bros responds:

Wall-e and Spiderman trailers!

[Stamper N' Johnny]

Poor stamper.

Needed cocks, lots of cocks.

Also you should have put :3 on stampers face.

Alot more creative than the others. Great parody.

SardonicSamurai responds:

Look closer

Loooook. Clooooser.

TOO CLOSE TOO CLOSE HAHAHAHA FOO'D YOU!

[Madness: Short 1]

Really slick

That was really fluid for being a short. I liked the bullet casing movements, I can never seem to get them to look real but you did very well. You also did well with how the ATP moved back from the recoil, thats another thing I can't pull off.

You should start making a real tribute with enemies and a silly plot.

[Blockhead: Episode 11]

Just missed it in the portal...

Great work again, had the cast all there, some turtle would have been nice.

Clever story as always, this one lacked the ghostmassy feel but who gives a damn, it was funny.

Keep it up sir.

[Portal Madness!]

Really good

When i first saw this under judgement I thought it wouldn't be worth my time, then it gone frontpaged and I gave it the looksie.

It was great, very well animated, and great use of portals.

Only critism i can think of is maybe the portals could have been better looking but, that doesn't change much.

Great job

[Metropolis Schmirkit]

Hurray parody

I love parodies of this kinda stuff.

You should have drawn huge annoying anime eyes though.

[Bad Baby]

Coming from a clinically insane person...

This is a very good representation of what someone with an insane mind thinks. I say good representation because unless you are insane you cannot comprehend what we think, otherwise you too would be insane. This flash is basically a generalization of thought I have in probably a second. It is random, weird, and freaky. The mind processes much faster and uses this extra speed to process random and what many call disturbed thoughts. I have thought about trying to animate this way of thought, but thanks to you, I never have to.

That was amazing sir, keep doing what you do best.

[Madness Ashoffka]

That was really good!

That was really good, it looks like alot of effort went into that.

I think you have a great sense of how to animate this stuff but heres a few nits I can pick to make it more madness like.

-The animation was rushed, I don't know what FPS you used but 32 is what is used for most the sprites and effects that you used.
-Feetwork slows down the rush of the animation so it seems a little more balanced, plus adds more realism and so forth instead of just basically gliding across the screen.
-Better sound effects would have been nice and maybe some vcam zooms and stuff.
-Have the text a little larger, you gave us plenty of time to read it but it was kinda small, maybe add some buttons that pauses the animation, lets you read it, then click a button to continue, but it works with the delay like you had.
-This is my personal believe that every gun needs bullet casings, they are a pain in the ass to make but will create better effects.

Heres a tip on bullet casings.
A good way to easy the hassle of animating them is to make a about 5 movieclips of a shell flying in a different way, that way there is variety and you can just toss in a bunch of them when there is automatic fire and so forth, the more different movieclips you use the better, just be careful to make sure that when they end their animation they stay on the ground or don't float above the ground.

But 10/10 5/5, I would love to see another one.