Atgod88's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Achivement Madness]

Great idea

Would love to see the idea explored further, I understand time constraints and all that but hope to see some more. Main problem, scrap the beginning, no need for voices in madness and I understood the premise from the title. Didn't need a voice and text to tell me what was going on. Expand on this, I'd love to see more.

Deathisawesome responds:

Understand what you mean, and I will probably do that way if I do an "Achivement Madness 2" :)

[Paper Mario Madness]

Nostalgic

I liked all the references, I never played the second game but I enjoyed all the little quirks like the shyguy tripping and the hammer's charge up. Gonna have to play through the original now. Definately amusing and clever. If you wanted the big money I think you know what has to be made.

Alpha-Nuva responds:

i never played the second game either. lol

[Madness Hunt 2]

Big improvement

You did a lot better this time around. There was some fluid movements, it got better as it got closer to the end. There were still some flaws that are common with madness tributes.

Your primary issue is you need more movement, especially at the beginning, the protagonist would stand around and kill everyone then hop around to move. Some easy ways to add more depth in movement is tween the body piece and animate the stuff with the body tweened, then after, animate the feet frame by frame. It makes the movement smooth and even if you aren't good at the feet animations, the smooth tweens make the feet less noticable. If you can get some guides on your tweens you can make a very realistic movement. If you think you can do it without tweening you can make more complex movements, but unless you are really patient and constantly scrub the scene, you can easily make movements too rapid or choppy. I don't know, play around with it.

One other thing is, since you are new to flash, you undoubtly get better as you animate, which normally makes the beginning of a flash lower quality than the end, so it is sometimes useful if using scenes to animate the first scene later on to get a more impressive start enticing people to watch the whole movie.

Good job.

Crazymonkey154 responds:

Thanks. I do admit that the beginning was a little off compared to the rest, but I really gave this my all. The walking in the beginning wasn't all that good either. And I do just about everything frame-by-frame except for the V-CAM.

[Left 4 Bed]

Pills joke

Really needed a pills joke. Other then that, pretty orgasmic. I liked the multiple redrawn faces, added a great touch.

Valve should have kept this gang in for L4D2, the only awesome one now is Coach who is basically Tyler Perry without the ointment or the lawsuits.

Now you need to make one with a boomer and a smoker.

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

They should at least be unlockable or something.

Lol ;).

[Madness - Preloaded II]

Good thing that isn't Hank

Because I would have a hard time deciding who would win in a fight, 47 or Hank.

Preloader guy can lose, I don't care for him, he hasn't been revived 8 times.

Slick animation, I liked the camera movements and angles. The only complaint is it was quite short. Other then that good work.

LYRONMARTIS responds:

I have NO idea who that preloader guy is !

[Madness Acceptence 3: LNR]

Don't use stupid icons.

The animation was pretty smooth, I liked the wacky, sporadic flips between rooms but you broke 3 basic rules.

-Must have sounds, gunshots, screams, anything
-You put a stupid icon for the flash, let alone a stolen image.
-Put bullet casings, not as important as the other rules but still it makes a point.

Also, you should have fixed some of the masking issues, I understand being rushed but don't submit something that is full of problems.

Oh, and don't type like a 4 year old in your comments. Your basic problem is you did a good job animating, but you acted like a child with everything else. Add a few sounds and bullet casings, use logical icons, and don't talk like you lost a fight with a nail gun and you might be worth a few 5's.

LNR123 responds:

The Sweenytodd picture i got permission for. i do have friends in hollywood you know. well 2 but they said FINE wateva, if its on google do we care

I dont give a fuk realy if i act like A 4 year old in my writing???? What are you the writing inspector. Thanks for the crytiosim but seriusly some of that is saying i SHOULD CHANGE.